This has been running through my head for days. I had to get it out. Like a song you've heard on the radio that plays over and over for hours in your mind. No worries, all is good... just a thought.....
Were have you been?
You said it was better for you
better for me......
you hide and you lurk
leaving traces
did you want me to see?
I miss you babe......
in my time of need
this is not
how friendship is supposed to be
©DonnaLD
31 comments:
How powerful!! I love this entry. (((((((Donna))))))))))
~Meg
ah it fits so well some things
I didn't know you were a writer as well as a graphic artist!
Traci
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Beautiful and powerful words Donna
Hugs
Mari
Lovely sentiment ,lovely graphic ...love Jan xx
beautiful dona
Very profound and beautiful. Thanks for sharing. Hugs, Maria
OOOOOOOh didnt know you had it in ya!! LOL nah only joking hun - beautiful hun - now where's that bucket ... LOL Laine xxxxx sorry being cheeky today!! ha ha
Donna
Nice poem. I'm glad you got it down on paper. Very well done!
Sam
I just love it when the 'muse' visits.....'cos she inspires wonderful prose and poetry. Lovely and mysterious Donna. Jeanie xx
Simply beautiful.
XOXO,
bridgett
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Sorry it hurts so much Donna.
Krissy
http://journals.aol.com/fisherkristina/SometimesIThink
its good you got it out and shared with us. that tag and saying is wonderful as well as the poem.
wow, that's awesome D! And also, VERY fitting!
Next time you get somethin like that in your head, write it here! lol!
Lv ya
xxx
That was GREAT.....really enjoyed it. Love the fitting tag...hugs and love,
Joyce
Nice poem...
Sorry I have been missing... busy busy!
be well,
Dawn
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I love this one!!!
Theresa
that is beautiful. do you write poetry often? (((((((hugs))))))
Cindy
I've had friendships like that...
hug,
Russ
Very touching, almost tragic verse.
Debbie
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D, I read this several times. It's fabulous! Then I started to think who in their right might would think life would be better without you in it? No way in hell! No WAY in hell! Thank you for sharing this, it's powerful. Tell your friend to get their head examined
are you sad? What a nice poem. Love it.
Love you,lisa jo
What lovley words......... Gaz :-)
that is so freakin' awesome!!!!!!!!!!
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